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For Part 1 of your fourth and final essay / final exam, you will choose one of the 3 essays you already submitted this semester and answer the following questions in reference to the essay you choose. Please number your responses so it's clear what question you're answering. For Part 2, you will focus on revising or rewriting a body paragraph from a previous essay.
Note: You want to answer these questions as clearly and honestly as possible.
Taking in mind what you wrote for part 1, write one new body paragraph
for the essay you focused on in part 1. You can take one of two
approaches to this:
Please make sure to follow the body paragraph guidelines from prompt and essay map for the essay you choose.
Length: 3 pages (835 Words)
The essay was successful because it highlighted and informed the benefits of fruits and vegetables in the diet. This can be noted from the examples given in the essay and the lengthy explanations made about fruits and vegetables. By focusing on the same subject of discussion from the beginning to the end of the essay, the paper puts weight on the issue that makes the reader analyze it with much interest. The essay also successfully delivered its message by making use of examples drawn from common fruits and vegetables that are known to everyone.
The essay fell short by failing to consider the issue as a general problem by considering it at the personal level. The writer uses personal pronouns such as ‘I’ and ‘me.’ This makes the paper lose the focus of a research study. Another weakness of the essay is that it does not have a topic sentence and a thesis statement. The writer goes directly to answering the essay question without giving a general introduction.